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onyx crowns (headstones and the brush of winter)

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she credits the metal bars
for finding footing in sunday soils,
the stone slips down the fronting steps,
slick in rain -

(and rock, and rock, and rock,)

there is a fading kind of shout;
the clouds are the sky in her muted,
mystery-failed militia, and to arms
went the ploughshares, not to return
until the evening tone of the cathedral
brought them home

this skin is paltry, the eyes, the eyes -
a phantom carved into the brushed-steel
of these ancillary altars

the winter wrought everything,
and struck it from her hands:
"fresh out of ploughshares, dear" -
not an apology, just
the truth
I never enter contests because by the time I've written the poem I've always lost all sense of confidence in my own work. I do feel that way about this poem, but I'm feeling ok today anxiety-wise and I'm going through with it anyway. 

Written for Lissomer's "Micro colour contest", where it is doomed to fail but may as well stand pretty for the crowd, right? I've got some other ideas, too, so I may write another one. We'll see. 

The color I chose for this piece is 'onyx'; (hex code #353839, can be seen here) I worry a little that the imagery in this piece evokes something a little lighter than that.
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